 Lexodus 2009-08-23 . chapter 4This is really really good (I found it after reading LLO for the third time :D) and I can't wait for more! No, really. I start college in ten days :S
Anyway, may I humbly request an update as soon as humanly possible, or would that be too forward of me? |
 Court123 2009-08-10 . chapter 4omg!!
i love it!!
keep going!!
its great!! |
 Amberlicious 2009-03-14 . chapter 4Omg I officially love this now.
Update ASAP |
 XxnickixX 2009-02-19 . chapter 4nice chapter, really liking the story. update soon! =) |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-18 . chapter 4Interconnection of stories!! YA!! I feel so smart right now. And I didn't even do anything. :)
Update soon! |
 nancy 2008-12-03 . chapter 1 I loved A little less obvious and i cant wait to start reading this one please update soon! |
 Amberlicious 2008-10-09 . chapter 3Is LLO a real band? I cant find their music anywhere!!
Anyway. this is so awesome too.
Jack is so cute. And Skylar is cool.
Jazzlyn is a sweetie. and the mom is a b"§"§§$
You need to update woman! (i hope you are a girl otherwise i sound extremely stupid)
Amber |
 XxnickixX 2008-10-05 . chapter 3i really like the story. nice job! more soon please! |
 telepop 2008-10-05 . chapter 1My god, I love this kind of storyline. The writing style isn't bad either. So keep the chapters rolling, babe! Pretty please. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-10-05 . chapter 3Jazz is such a sweetheart...i absolutely adore her! And Jack is so nice to her. He does have a heart. Stephanie is mean...i'm sticking my tonge out at her. This was a great chapter! Update soon...:) |
 Linouuu 2008-09-28 . chapter 2I like this one, too. :) It's nice to find Rochelle in there. :)
And Jack is funny and it's fun that he's going to try again. Good luck buddy! ;) |
 Chihara-san 2008-09-11 . chapter 2I love the plot of this story, and I love how the band, Little Less Obvious, is in here, and even Rochelle. :) |
 ilovetheopera 2008-09-10 . chapter 2Brilliant stuff, fast-paced and interesting. Better than a lot of ** I've read in the past few months. Very good actually. Please do continue. |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-09-08 . chapter 2Interesting...I like this so far! Update soon! :) |
 abandoned1234 2008-09-03 . chapter 1WOW.
I have to say, I am a REALLY BIG nitpicker for grammar and writing style, but I have to say this story so far is really impressive. :) I love your writing--flowy, but not too flowery, and everything that you mention has a point. I like that you are specific, but not tedious in your details. Excellent job!
I just have a hard time that Sklyar would sit in the back for twenty minutes. And that she really looks seventeen. Will there be an explanation for the latter point? I sure hope so! I will definitely be watching this story. Can't wait to read more! |