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Lexodus 2009-08-23 . chapter 4
This is really really good (I found it after reading LLO for the third time :D) and I can't wait for more! No, really. I start college in ten days :S
Anyway, may I humbly request an update as soon as humanly possible, or would that be too forward of me?
Court123 2009-08-10 . chapter 4
omg!!
i love it!!
keep going!!
its great!!
Amberlicious 2009-03-14 . chapter 4
Omg I officially love this now.

Update ASAP
XxnickixX 2009-02-19 . chapter 4
nice chapter, really liking the story. update soon! =)
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-18 . chapter 4
Interconnection of stories!! YA!! I feel so smart right now. And I didn't even do anything. :)

Update soon!
nancy 2008-12-03 . chapter 1
I loved A little less obvious and i cant wait to start reading this one please update soon!
Amberlicious 2008-10-09 . chapter 3
Is LLO a real band? I cant find their music anywhere!!

Anyway. this is so awesome too.

Jack is so cute. And Skylar is cool.

Jazzlyn is a sweetie. and the mom is a b"§"§§$

You need to update woman! (i hope you are a girl otherwise i sound extremely stupid)

Amber
XxnickixX 2008-10-05 . chapter 3
i really like the story. nice job! more soon please!
telepop 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
My god, I love this kind of storyline. The writing style isn't bad either. So keep the chapters rolling, babe! Pretty please.
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-10-05 . chapter 3
Jazz is such a sweetheart...i absolutely adore her! And Jack is so nice to her. He does have a heart. Stephanie is mean...i'm sticking my tonge out at her. This was a great chapter! Update soon...:)
Linouuu 2008-09-28 . chapter 2
I like this one, too. :) It's nice to find Rochelle in there. :)
And Jack is funny and it's fun that he's going to try again. Good luck buddy! ;)
Chihara-san 2008-09-11 . chapter 2
I love the plot of this story, and I love how the band, Little Less Obvious, is in here, and even Rochelle. :)
ilovetheopera 2008-09-10 . chapter 2
Brilliant stuff, fast-paced and interesting. Better than a lot of ** I've read in the past few months. Very good actually. Please do continue.
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-09-08 . chapter 2
Interesting...I like this so far! Update soon! :)
abandoned1234 2008-09-03 . chapter 1
WOW.
I have to say, I am a REALLY BIG nitpicker for grammar and writing style, but I have to say this story so far is really impressive. :) I love your writing--flowy, but not too flowery, and everything that you mention has a point. I like that you are specific, but not tedious in your details. Excellent job!

I just have a hard time that Sklyar would sit in the back for twenty minutes. And that she really looks seventeen. Will there be an explanation for the latter point? I sure hope so! I will definitely be watching this story. Can't wait to read more!
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