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| ilovetheopera 2008-09-03 ch 1,   | I think you have a typo: first word is missing an apostrophe. Otherwise, vague, but in a good way. Though you didn't mention any of the character's feelings, the yearning was very apparent. A different take on the Romeo and Juliet thing which I actually like - good one. |