The ending didn't seem to resolve, but then I thought about it a little more, and I think I got it. All in all, I thought it was pretty good.

Ugh, sorry for not being active guys (in fact, I don't think I've even posted yet D|). I've been so busy. In any case, I've been sick this weekend and loaded with two projects (due TOMORROW! argargarg -freaks out-), so I'll try to get in my votes soon...if I can.

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Sorry sorry sorry.

mechanics - Faelein
originality - Panda Knight
Best - Panda Knight

Mechanics: Faelein

Originality: Alchemy

Best: Faelein

It was like a soap opera! The grammar needs some work, but the plot was fun.

Very random, but entertaining.

Ha, this was fun! I liked it a lot.

I like the interwining of her plans for the drawing with her trip to the hardware store. It made it very interesting.

Interesting, but kinda confusing.

The plot seemed a bit divided (concentrating on the beehive for the first half, then Brendan for the second). However I liked that it was the girl who cheated opposed to the guy (in practically everything I read, it's always the guy), so it was kinda of refreshing. I really liked that last bit, too.

Hm...the dialogue was a bit strange (it seemed somewhat unnatural), but perhaps that was the intention? I'm not really sure what was going on, but it was still fun to read.

I really enjoyed this (the writing was so well done!). I wasn't quite sure what was going on...but I think I got the gist of it...

I think I love you,BlackCat. insanity with a drop of morbid, absolutly awesome.

I didn't see any errors in spelling, the whole story of an insane, split-personality is kinda cliche but i like it here.

Wowies, I did kidna lvoe it. Very bitter and twisted at the end... musta meant the MC went mad.

Mechanics: The Maiden by Scholar
Originality: Creeping Charlie by BlackCat
Best: The Last Dance by Lenari Soto