It's short, but quite good. Please continue!

Okay, you piqued my interest. But it is extremely short, and I would like more.

Ooh, Cliffie!
I want you to update soon k?

prologue sounds great, looking forward to reading the actual story.
~Karenai Hana~

it is a good start to your story, I just wished you had expanded a little more. :) Post soon x

From your summary, this sounds like an interesting idea. I don't get much of a sense of how it is going to be developed from this prologue, but look forward to reading further.

- gold against the soul

Nice little prologue. No sign of a real plot yet but from your description, this looks alright.