Hey!

I'm quite surprised that you updated. I've had this story in my favourites for some time but i figured that that was the end of this story. I#m glad that you have continued and will continue to post because now I'm even more curious about the new characters you have introduced.

Please post once again. There was a few typos but nothing major :)

Col

O!! This seems to intrigued me more than the first chapter did!! Please continue to write. I really do enjoy what you have written so far. One typo I spotted (tilted instead ot titled) but otherwise great job!!

Colette

hey,
Although I'm not sure what's going to happen but I can tell that this is a great piece to begin the story with. you should write more. You write very well and I love the orginality with the names.

Keep writing x