hmm i like it, it moves along a bit fast but I still like it. good job, keep up the good work, can't wait to see more

Wow, really like it so far.

Sugoi ne

Well, this is returning to the deconstructive roots of Sailor Nothing. Hopefully your story will strike a balance between the shiny happiness of Moon and the dark depression of Nothing, carving its own niche into it.

And I smirked at the mention of the name Amaterasu... her character plays such a radically different role in Matei Mizuki.

Well, having written (and completed) my own Magic Girl story here, I thought this was a pretty interesting start. A little more conventional and by-the-books than Matei Mizuki, but a reconstruction is nice to read once in a while.

Camilla's... appearance... set off a little alarm in my head, due to my aversion to red-headed heroines caused by my unlimited hatred of the Winx Club and my profound dislike for WITCH, but I can't call you on that yet. I hope you do some background information, because that usually helps answer more than a few questions.

Anyways, I hope you continue with this so I can keep reading. _

Pretty good! Pretty good. Can't wait to see where it goes! Don't forget SHOW, DON'T TELL! :) love ya! (NOT WEIRD, SHE'S MY SISTER!) lol!

chihuahua hearted! Tehe