You know, this is one of the best lyrics I'd seen on here. I love the line 'I've become just backdrop in the winter, wasteland' that was cool. I'm interested to reading more of your work.

This is like my fourth time reading this. XP Weirdly enough, I found it at school yesterday when I randomly wanted to check if I could access the site without being blocked by Bess - the internet police dog that disallows any site that has the potential to be "bad". Such as the Google Images sections... Beware.

Anyway, the freaky thing was I just wanted to check the Just In section and lo' and behold... here you were. It's like I knew or something that you updated by a psychic message I wasn't quite aware of. Who needs alerts anymore? XD

I thought the title was pretty cool, although I admit when I first saw it I was all: What...? It's awesome that you have a bass, I'm jealous. I've always wanted a guitar, but it's not in our budget.

My favourite lyrics were: "Frozen are these useless stick hands!
The light, so close I can almost taste it! And it burns so good! As February fades away again!" I liked the mentions of what is usually used with Snowman as well, stick hands and the coal eyes. I tend to use rocks... I don't have a vast amount of coal just lying around like most kids do. I wonder if that makes me weird.

As for mistakes, I didn't see any in particular. But to tell you the truth, I wasn't really searching for them all that hard.

Hope to see more from you soon. Good job!