YAY! i like thsi sotry!! It sounds though like his fatehr abuses him, or something, and I lik the reference to Jay's past!
Lee

Sweet, I really enjoyed reading this story so far! Update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I wonder what Gavin has to take medication for...

Great story and keep up with the excellent work! Please update! :)

aww i always loved jayden, but its much better for it to be yaoi =D

I have decided to religiously read this =P

so you must update asap

OMGOSH.! SUPER GOD.!


update soon.! like asap.!

Jayden is awsome! =D

I think i may like these seperate stories than CMG [though i still love that!] much more description and stuff about what is going on

Update ASAP!

ayy, i like this alot and i always will because the storyline makes me a happy person, but i think the last one was better, no offense. but im sure this one will turn out to be just as well. after all, this is just the first chapter and i hope there's more to come soon.

dude.
I like this.
alot.

:]