I read authors note and have voted lol. PLZ PLZ PLZ update asap, cant wait for more im so excited.

oh we have a cliffie in chapter 2 im so excited about chapter 3 so update soon plz

It's an interesting chapter, but it lacks a lot of action that you really need in your story to keep readers interested. As for the pairing, I'm going to guess it's either Terry and Evyn (love that name by the way) or Evyn and some character we haven't met yet.

Action isn't always a fight, it can be any sort of rubbing the wrong way - for that, you need an antagonist at your school soon, or some sort of plot establishment, or even some sort of motive.

Sorry if you don't want the advice (criticism?). You can just ignore it if you want.
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I forgot, does he got to talk to the dragons? that'd be cool, he could be like Merlin!

m food =P weird roommate, trying to hog the whole room like that and what was the screaming I wonder...

Keep it up and keep it going plz plz plz plz. also on the pov if its changed can it NOT be the aunty or some evil person maybe a love interest or some random schooler or some dude lol. Update asap plz

This is interesting and seems really fun! can't wait to read more :D I like Tany :P she seems really cute, and I'd like to see how Evyn does in his new school and who he meets ;D

Seams interesting so far...

Great start! Evyn has a whole lot of personality, and several of his unspoken thoughts made me giggle. This was fun to read (I liked the humor!). I did notice a couple tense switches (between present and past). Just be careful of that. Otherwise, awesome job!

It's an interesting story - but it seems like you've spent too much time revving up your story instead of jumping into the action. However, it seems to be an otherwise okay story, I'm interested to see how well you'll do with it since this IS a pretty common premise for a story. I can't wait to see what you're going to do with it.
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