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Reviews For: Never too old to fall in love

Estelin
2008-10-16
ch 1,
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
Strangely Natural
2008-09-07
ch 1,
*“I’ll have you know that Bryn liked what I made for him,” Briaselle laughed, wondering for a moment if it was alright that she didn’t feel pain and sorrow anymore when thinking or speaking of her former husband. “Or he was just too scared to say anything to you!”* lovely depiction of uncertainty and humor.
*The usually brazen, bold Kieran was faltering under her questioning.* signifying something big and important brewing inside him. Something marvelous.
*It was time for the physical side to be introduced as well.* she is a cultivated woman.
*She wrapped her arms around his shoulders, pulling him close. “M, everything and more.” Kieran actually blushed and Briaselle giggled, kissing his lips tenderly. “Everything is perfect now,” she whispered, believing it.* lovely moments, full of hope and tenderness. Beautiful written story, just gorgeous style.
LaLa
2008-09-06
ch 1,
I just saw this and realized it answered my questions from The Kitchen. It is very well written, but I did wish Kieran would have express his feelings by saying them. The love scene was really sweet.
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