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Reviews For: Breaking Dawn Aftermath
katupatu 2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Ha ha i felt the same when i was finished wit that book
simpleplan13 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
I like this because most of us on fp can relate to how connected we get to books and their impact on us. Your descriptions of it made you feel are exaggerated (I'm guessing) a little but, but I think that works really well with the piece to create the emotion. I also like your description of the story, with almost all one words, nice job. Though in that part you start using commas and then switch to dashes, I would stick with one.

PS If you're bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
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