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Reviews For: Tears Not Shed
simpleplan13 2008-09-28 . chapter 1
"to my souls demise"... soul's
"But it is too late you’re distant and falling"... I felt like maybe you could split this line into two

I like the piece, it's very bittersweet. I also like the ring finger thing, it's interesting.
estelle bolin 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
:) thats just what I needed right now
Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-09-06 . chapter 1
This is not my best poem for sure...
but this is all I could write at the time ...

Anyway, let me know what you all think...
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