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| simpleplan13 2008-09-28 ch 1,   | "to my souls demise"... soul's "But it is too late you’re distant and falling"... I felt like maybe you could split this line into two I like the piece, it's very bittersweet. I also like the ring finger thing, it's interesting. |
| estelle bolin 2008-09-09 ch 1, | :) thats just what I needed right now |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-09-06 ch 1, | This is not my best poem for sure... but this is all I could write at the time ... Anyway, let me know what you all think... |