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i love this story
it deserves so much more recognition then it gets
i love all of your stories, and miss this desperately
please update soon
i check everyday

Because Fictionpress is being glitchy I'm reviewing not logged-in. So... I love it! Damn it is so good. Rafe's great, Cole's great, they're both sexy as hell and I want more! Gr...
Please write more!
Xenn

I know you didn't want grammatical stuff but i thought i should point this out: “It’s kind of barbarian, isn’t it?” barbarian should be barbaric.

aside from that, this story is fantastic. A physical description of carl would be nice. also, i assume you're already going to be doing this but maybe go more in depth with the relationship rafe had with jace. i can't decide if it was romantic or not

please update soon!

really amazing story! i love this - i don't know whether you are planning on finishing but it would be great it you did. just out of interest - is this after the time span in a whole new crowd? i like the characters you've created and the writing here :D

are you ever going to come back to this?

I know you said that you didnt write this story for reviews but i thought that i would leave you one anyways. I completely love this story, more then the other two that go with it. I like it because it follows the a sister trying to help out another sister. I feel as though that story line is not done alot (it is always a brother trying to help another brother, or a brother and sister). It is a nice change to see a sister trying to help a sister (even if she doesnt like her that much), usually sisters are just protrayed as hating each other. The only thing about the story that i find confusing is that sometimes you switch to someone other then Rafe's point of view and it is not always clear to the reader. But other then that the story is off to a good start and I hope that you finish it.

Great :) Have you wriiten about Cole before? I read your other stories a while ago and i can't remember.

I hope you update soon! I really want to know what happens next!

this is suh a great stroy. i love rafe, she's such a great character. update soon.

you really are an amazing writer.
i love rafe. shes such an interesting character. cole looks pretty promising too :]
please update soon!
thanks

I'm really liking Rafe in this - she's definately more badass than Taryn or Maya and i'm curiuos to see how her story will play out.

really liking this story, rafes story is just more raw and i cant wait for more so update asap plz

Have you written about Cole before? I dont remember him at all from your previous stories.

Ergh, i hate cliffhangers! (well i don't, there a good literary technique, but extremely frustrating)
This is going to be really good, i can tell, i love your stories!