Holy poop why are you so good at poetry. XD
I luff it. I really need to go read the rest. So I am going to do that now, because I am sick and can't go to school. :)

Salleh

You would be some sort of stale parchment
smothered in a dark, crisp ink

That was my favorite part, btw. :O

wow, this is really good. I'm very impressed. Hey, when you get a second could you maybe give me your imput on a situation I'm dealing with right now? I need outside advice about something...

I really like the metaphors you used in this. I mean, you could have gone for something totally cliche, but you were able to take this situation and subject and use an umbrella, sandcastle and a letter. I really like it. Awesome stuff.

Wow. I absolutely adore this poem.

I'm like...speechless.

I love the style. I adore using elongated analogies. This was a perfect example. I immensely enjoyed reading it. I could feel the emotion seeping through your writing.

It's definitely a favorite of mine.

Always,
breathingsofmyheartxx