:D awesome story,

if you write an extension i'm so reading it!

Wow, that was awesome. I really wanted to read more TT_TT but it ended. If you ever decided to extend the story i'd totally read it! The ending was great though, even if it did frustrate me it was still great. >_< - morgue chan

love it!
please, for the sake of my sanity, continue!

OH VERY interesting story! Dark and good! I like it a lot. *evil fan girl's smirk* Don't worry slash rape is quite fun to read/write sometimes.

Nice ending too~ the evil red coat...dun dun dun~

If ever you plan to do an extension, remmeber to notify me!

that was a great story. i really liked it.

Great story, rather unique. The story had a tangy taste (yes I ate the story xD) to it.

FAVS

i really enjoyed reading this. i dont even care it was a rape thing, i really loved it. i really like the end XD nice twist.

cool, i really liked this.

I read Laundry Day and i like how you end the story with kinda a happy ending but with an open interpretation, so when i read Snow Vampire i expect the same thing and it works!..
i mean how you wrote the story and end it with a remark of a possible ending (happy)~
so i guess i want to say that i love your stories and hope that you write more coz i like your way of story telling and how you make the story flows differently than other writers..GREAT WORK ~~!!

i started reading this thinking it wasnt going to be brilliant (lets face it most vampire stories either are or turning into crap)but then i got to the rape-age thing and from that point i was kinda hooked on the rest...though, one thing,

hours after i read this piece i realized that vampires can't get into a home without being invited in, and Sam never did that. however for the sake of the plot (quite good might i add) i will overlook it.

I actually like this one a bit more than your others. The idea, I could do without. I've never been really into vampire stories (twilight WTF?), but I like your writing style. Especially here. You don't drag things out too much. You keep it descriptive, but not to the point that everything is stretched to unbearable proportions.

What else can say?

I like.

Yeah.

Hugs and kisses, all for you.

this thing definatly needs more...Asking my muse for idea's...
AHA!

You could continue the story as is! I kinda don't understand those thingies at the bottom of the page but uhm...
oh yeah...Like Marius could stalk Sam and Sam could slowly start to change in to a Vampire/ Sin eater(loved that Idea) creature of the night. Then Once the Transformation is complete Marius could like be all 'hello my pet.' and Sam can't resist him and then lots of more steamy rape sex!

just idea's and it's late and I've got WAY to much time on my hands.