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vitriolicvermilion 9/10/08 . chapter 1Ooh, I like this (: Normally italics annoy the living frijoles out of me, but in this poem, they really work and I like it. I like the way it rhymes, it really flows. The stanzas keep everything as a separate thought of a main idea. Very good. (: "So maybe it’s just better I go I may be better off alone I’m so sorry I led you to this, I wish that there was only empty bliss" Is probably my favorite line. Beautiful poem. I look forward to reading some of your other work. (: By the way, thank you so much for your reviews on my pieces! It's really nice when someone takes the time to give a little feedback (: |
IndiaLikeTheCountry 9/6/08 . chapter 1Ah, this is really sad, but beautifully written :) |