This was a very good song. I really like the feel of it and the comparisons and symbolism made. Beautiful work.

o.o Nicely done. I like the concept behind this piece. (:

~Unknown Survivor

*bursts into tears* that-was-beautiful! *cries*

Amazing. Seriously amazing.

"Feel the pain, as it hits
Careful yet sure(like your lips on hers)"

That hit a nail into one of the most painful places in my heart.