Aww, that's so sad. Please tell me what happens next!

Now that was really cool!

Of course; who on EARTH uses a front door anymore? d:P


"You really shouldn’t get so cocky, Lisy, the voice said.

“Lissy?” Brodie turned to me, his eyes cast in worry. “Are you okay?”

My eyes took a quick look in the mirror and my eyebrows were burrowed in anxiety and I was frowning."

I think you need to put that last line in between your imp and Brodie's dialogue...or something that shows that something is wrong besides the sudden italicized dialogue.


Fist-shaped or fist-SIZED? Because fist shaped would make for a pretty interesting looking imp dxD


Hehe Brodie is SO innocent dxD


"I could tell he was hoping to have some nice alone time… to talk—you sickos."

I think it would look (yes I said look) funnier and more comedic if it were put something like...

"I could tell he was hoping to have some nice alone time…
To talk.
You sickos."

or

"I could tell he was hoping to have some nice alone time…to talk.
You sickos."

d:P


"I gasped and clapped a hand to my chest. “Be still, my heart, for I have found the one!”"
dxD


I hate that imp too d:P


DIE EVIL SISTER IN LAW! >D
Wait, out of curiosity, do you really have that situation in your family? Evil/good sister in law and a neice born out of wedlock? Because I seem to recall this situation, possibly in Mystiks, and possibly in another story, or possibly just popped into my head out of nowhere, so yeah d:P


Okay, I agree with the imp on that last line when it comes to talking back to people who don't deserve your respect. d:P

Update soon (:

This was really easy to read and I found myself at the end far too soon.
I liked the bit about thinking about nothing important then. It made me chuckle, although I am glad the imp was there to stop things getting too soppy. That's just me though.
I'm curious about how Imp ended up there - adn how she is going to get rid of him. Presuming she is of course?