I absoulutley love this story!
You really captured Suzzete's emotions,
and the tension through the 3 chapters is great!

You also have a really good writing style.
It's descriptive and intelligent, without being boring.

i'll definitly read some of your other work.
you may want to consider a sequel, unles you're bored with the characters or something.

I enjoyed every minute of this story. :)

I really like this story, so keep up the good work! I'm excited to read the following chapters :)

I really love your stories. This one had beautiful language and a nice suspenseful plot. It reminded me a lot of a modern eighteenth century style of writing... if that makes any sense, lol. Very wonderful reading, thank you.