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| Reviews for NightMoths |
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   Ernest Bloom 9/13/08 . chapter 1imo similes are weak. striking ", like" from line 2 would add toughness, i think. you're not really watching the world, are you, but are semi-consciously captivated by one miniscule motion in it. good, though. |
| ode to melancholy 9/9/08 . chapter 1 Love this. A lot. But you knew that already. :) |
| i-want-2-delete-my-account 9/8/08 . chapter 1 Nice description of the moths. |
