|Reviews for NightMoths|
| Ernest Bloom 9/13/08 . chapter 1
imo similes are weak. striking ", like" from line 2 would add toughness, i think.
you're not really watching the world, are you, but are semi-consciously captivated by one miniscule motion in it.
| ode to melancholy 9/9/08 . chapter 1
Love this. A lot. But you knew that already. :)
| i-want-2-delete-my-account 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Nice description of the moths.