Hello again. I'm sorry about your mom. I don't know what it's like to loose a parent, but i guess all i can say is(if you believe in reincarnation) you'll see her again. not in this life, but the next/(if you believe in heaven) you'll definately see her there and you can catch up. She is also probably keeping an eye on you. So don't make her job too hard by doing a crazy stunt.

PS if you don't want me to talk to you like this, let me know and i'll stop OK?

I'm not sure why you capitalized the Y in You it almost makes it seem like you're talking about God, which I don't think you are so I didn't like that. If you wanna emphasize it do the whole word or maybe just italicize it?

"That this pain would go away,/I'd have brighter days." Either that coma needs to be a semi-colon or you have to make a connecting word like that I'd or and I'd so the second part isn't it's own sentence.

I like how you say you'd even want to fight with them it shows how much you really miss her. It's a sweet piece and I like how you dont actually say mom because it makes it more relateable since it translates to different situations

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Oh honey, I love you. I don't even know you and I love you. Things will be better, you'll make it through, stay strong.

I wrote something tonight but I left it in my locker because I was so pissed off, so maybe I'll have something new tomorrow, too.

*hugs*
-stix-

like i always say, you are an amazing writer. =]

:( well im glad to see you writing again after so long. But I was hoping for a more cheerful opening

This was such a sweet poem, it'll go in my favorites!
I liked how you wrote your feelings, the words you chose and the tone of the poem. I liked your setup with the sentences, and how you ended the poem. Keep it up! Good to see you're back!
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