Felt sorry for Logan but when contending with cheeky charming Daniel what do you expect? ;)

Simple and sweet. I'm jealous of your one shot abilities. Really. I like that this isn't packed in cliches and kind of just has a heart of it's own. I can see it happening, it's real to me. That's a pretty awesome quality.

I loved this story. It was so sweet and written very well. It had a very good flow to it.

aww... I just knew that would happen coz... it's a bit cliche. but still. I kind of liked it.

love it love it love it. for a oneshot you've created very charasmatic and interesting characters , not to mention the writing is superb! so adorable and quite honestly really real, a couple years ago I sounded exactly like the girl!
well done

I'm going to take it that she and Daniel are best friends., because i really like this one-shot and i want to add it to my C2. very cute. :)