I feel like I'm missing something. Who's Rolfe?
This chapter goes REALLY fast. The description is a better though. :D Good job.

Interesting twist. Rose knows more than the others think she does?

Good, but again, could use more description. I'll keep reading it. The plot still seems nice. I'm hopeful here! :D

I like the plot summary. This chapter could use a lot more description and could be a lot longer. I see potential in it though. Good job, sounds like an interesting plot.

update? :)