Well you told me to review one of your stories, so I am. I really liked this a lot. Great job, it made me laugh!

actually that poem was...wen i read it to my mom she said it sounded like he abonded me.. who cares tho its my poem...i really like this poem, its humorous..something that i cannot write..i guess itz cuz im not an intentionaly funny person...but yea..great poem

Nice meter, yucky subject. But, hey, you forewarned with the title. This piece convinces me to peruse more of your work.

Keep writing! - M.T.

Lol. Thats nasty. But then again... kids... lol

This is a funny one! Nose pickers are gross! My only criticism is that I think you could come up with a better last line! But good job!