I really like your writing. It's honest and fresh.

I especially loved the 2nd to last stanza, "so i close my mouth and i breathe these words." Wonderful.

you knew me then.
and you do not know me now.

great line.
great poem in general, really.
:p

wow...creepy how much i relate to this. especially the last paragraph... cuz its whats kinda happening between me and my ex, but he has a girlfriend and she doesnt know im seeing him... he used to know me indeed, but he doesnt know me now

hey :) i like this, it’s totally unusual for you I think and not one of your best, but I love the ending…I haven’t been on ficpress for months! you keep changing pennames it's so hard to keep track :(

Incredible, as your work always is.

Wow, that was very powerful. I loved it.