ohmygod I love this. Especially how you get to the end and realize what it's about. Lovely and heartbreaking.

Remembrance
First taste of sugar && caffeine - they know,
it only happens once

No secret places?
girly girlie secrets abound,
love too but its not the same

never the same

familiar..family-iar.

cats & frogs.
stories & passtimes





Youre superior in this than me.
No doubt no doubt Im torn.
Put your feather to that ink and...
and
and
let it spill

loved the last sentence. its good to see yu are back and i hope you update soon!

your words always ache.

this is different from your usual, somehow. i wouldn't call it worse or better-- it's something else. i like it just as much but it moves me in a different way.

hm...I do like this poem, but...well...clearly this is about Virginia Woolf's suicide (I hope I don't spoil this for anyone). I guess I like this poem because it feels like an opening to more grand ideas. But...in the end I find it a sad (and effective) feminist piece.

The way this ends is so simple yet poignant. I really like how the imagery and literary devices you use are so subtle and can still leave me speechless. Take care.

I am amazed.