I absolutley, LOVE this :) Blunt and just, wow :) well done, :) keep up the excellent work :)

so how in god's name i didn't review this before, i don't know. because i'm obviously very much in love with it. straight from "any other holden", on into the ohsocasual slip of, "you shouldn't stick anything up your ** that you wouldn't put in your mouth". it's nonchalant. and sharp. and i really. **. love it. mhmkay.

I have to give it to you...
I have never read anything like that before...
written beautifully... but harsh ...

*Tiffy

i really like the harshness of this, and the reference to Catcher in the Rye. "Like any other Holden," just flows so nicely.

good work,
k.X