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Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-09-19 . chapter 1
I haven't been here for a long time... thought that I would stop by and as always your poem is written beautifully...

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-tiffy
SEMMU 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Great job with describing the endothermic nature of humans. I particularly enjoyed the imagery envoked by: " Even the small steps I must make this day
Seem to me to be those of a child in his father's shoes".

I can see myself standing in the hallway, during the dead of winter, just praying that I can make it to the coffee pot.

Great job! Write on!
StrawberryStars 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful, Matthew. One of your best pieces to date. I love the images you chose of fall and winter. Wonderful, wonderful work. :)
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