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| Kaname-Kun 2008-09-09 ch 1,   | I thought it was pretty cool how there were a good amount of oxymorons throughout the poem...I love oxymorons XD... It seemed to be a poem that didn't have too much ... Body/form in it because the first quatrain is repeated to be the last quatrain. So basically, I believe it's three quatrains, two of which are repeats... Just saying it seems somewhat short. Line structure and flow were awesome though XD Loved the flow in general. The idea itself of the evil side of a werewolf is a sort of uncommon topic on poetry sites usually and i Love the uniqueness of the idea, i just think it has the potential to be a little more developed (the poem, not the idea -- the idea's great!) |
| Faelorn Exordius 2008-09-08 ch 1, | This is excellent work- diction is well thought out, idea is especially likable. Only thing I could suggest would be your line structure: it's a bit awkward. Other than that, its great! |