|Reviews for One Minute|
| fairytale failure 7/6/09 . chapter 1
Wow. Excellent details, and it packs an emotional punch at the end - makes me want to hear the story from the best man's perspective!
One issue I had was in the 3rd stanza, I couldn't figure out that the speaker was talking about himself in 3rd person. Maybe that was just me, though.
| Moon-Chaser 9/9/08 . chapter 1
Wow, you are really going with the bitterweet lately. This was so emotional I had touble breathing, because I knew it would end so beautifully and tragic. You describe these emotions so well. This was really well written and I love the way you write.
Keep it up.