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Original Screen Name 2009-04-08 . chapter 1
Okay, I love this. But you suck.

Not as a writer, as a person.

And I say this because you made such a cliffhanger story and didn't tell me what happened next! *pouting* meanie!!
paper parasols 2008-09-12 . chapter 1
'lo there. Yeah, I'm really glad that this is an original story, the essence of it was there. Hee-hee-hee.

And you made the end have some sort of cliffhanger ending. *grins* I love those, and I'm wondering what's going to happen to Alex, eh? Hmm...I definitely adding this to favs.
so i sing to the stars 2008-09-11 . chapter 1
Haha aw that was cute! A bit cliche and extremely predictable, yes, but very well-written and cute regardless. :)
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