Wow.
That was amazing. So very different and well written. Powerful. You really are a great writer.
~Eshana

What a clever idea!
I look forward to reading more. I like their slightly archaic way of speaking - it's sort of the way we imagine people from the past speaking, isn't it?
And I know it sounds really, really weird, but I'm looking forward to meeting Jakob's friend Adolf. Wonder where that might be headed... ;)
Thanks for the review on my story. As requested, I've updated, finally!