I love the word choices in this poem. I get such a strong visual from this.

I'm so sorry for not reviewing earlier; I hadn't even noticed you had posted joria! My apologies and thanks for the interest.

I think you've done a wonderful job with your joria. This has a very soft and almost pastoral feeling to it, worked out beautifully in rich imagery. Great work!

Once again, thank you for kind reviews and for trying out the jorio. It's wonderful to see and read!