Ha, amusing, but I figured it out pretty early. Chock it up to the fact that I saw "The Unborn" last week.

Creepy...

Nice. Just try to build up the story a bit more, because it seemed like the story was still too light hearted for Kathy's mom to tell her about her still-born twin. The conversation seemed a bit random. so, if you were to revise this story, you should let the haunting go on for a bit longer. other than that, good job.

wow i realy like this opener. im interested! update son!