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| tsarevich alexei 2008-11-03 ch 1,   | I really enjoy the way that you break the lines so that the narration of it in my head as I read breaks sharply and then picks back up again somehow smoothly when I look to the next line. Cool effect. |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-09-15 ch 1, | It is short and to the point. Very beautifully written. *Tiffy |
| kelsi bones 2008-09-13 ch 1, | using brightly to describe hurt works really well, as does separating "twitch/ing" and "some/where". k.X |