Wow, great work. Keep it up? Thanks by the way adding my work to fave's that sweet to knew someone like my dark tales lol.

from Lost Dreams

good, but a little bit confusing. but it could just be me.

I loved this. It had a sort of dream-like quality for me-mostly because of the beautiful imagery you used. You have such a talent with words. I especially liked the line "Darkness slipped in, without complaint of how horrible the taste was".

Wow... that's pretty much all I can think of to say. And as much as I want to say I liked it (because you have awesome talent!), I can't. It was very... pointless and difficult to follow. Now, I love the way you word things, but the entire idea of the story was confusing and still pointless. I'm sorry, but I just can't lie.