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| liVe-yOuR-fAntAsy 2008-11-22 ch 2, | Update soon ! I would love to read more! |
| Zamira 2008-10-30 ch 2, | Great story-line so far. I'm interested to see how the relationship between the Earl and Caroline develops. Please keep with it, and update soon! |
| MistressBlack852 2008-09-29 ch 2, | Hey!! This is making out to be a very interesting story! I hope you keep with it :) I was just wondering though, how is it that Caroline and Audrey know English? :) |
| Christa McGinn 2008-09-21 ch 1, | Please update. |
| PoorEnglishArtist 2008-09-12 ch 1, | A word of advice: NEVER use an online translator because they never give you the right thing - it gives it exactly word for word, with no regard for the grammar or even the meaning of the word. ASK someone how to say it, kay? Their language is stilted, not very peasanty, at least, I don't think so, but never having been a peasant, I wouldn't know. I really really like the idea though, and as a first chapter it's pretty good. an armada OF ships... |