The poems all seem to have a deep meaning. I'm going to stay up all night trying to figure what message they're trying to send. =) I like them all, especially #5.

The first one I really, really like. You have a way of putting words together really strongly. I think perhaps though that 3 and 5 may work better as short stories rather than poems. I'd like to see you develop these two as prose.

Hey! Guess who! Okay, yes, that's kind of dumb considering my name's right there... ahem, anyways, your poems...
#1: Perfect! I love it!
#2: I thought it was great right up until the last line.
#3: Put a little more work and length into it to make an actual point and it could be more of a comedy poem.
#4: Again perfect!
#5: This wasn't really a poem considering it had no pattern, rhythm, or rhyme, but I loved the point you made! :)
#6: I love it! I thought it was really cute with the Dr. Seuss theme. :) Good work!

#6: or like a Hobbit riddle.