You can't just leave it at that! Continue writing it please!

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Lies Sealed With A Kiss.

Sosososososo cute. (: I love it.

Too bad that he has a girlfriend. This will end badly.

I like the "I like your voice..." "I like you!"

I do that when people say "I like... INSERTSOMETHINGHERE".

Hehehee.

(:

Awesome.(:

I love it. I would have loved to see them kiss, but I still loved it

Dang this is interesting! (:

I am excited to see where this is leading!

Oh, just one main correction: At the 'over and over' part, you switch to first person, and you run with it until the end. Up until there, it was in third person. This seems kind of awkward...

Anyways, I really like the idea of not saying hey or hi or bye or anything. She sounds like she'd be fun to be friends with. (: Ooh, and Ciana is a BEAUTIFUL name!

i think you should continue this. it's a good one shot but i want to know what else happens. i love the way jacob sees ciana=)

:) I like this one. It is so well written and cute. I would love to read more.
These things are great for writers block. I have gone to writing weird romance things for a break from my deadly serious fantasy stories lol. It is fun!
Hope the writers block goes away :P

-A.V

absolutely amazing. :)
i love it !