I know I haven't been on in a while, but this past weekend I read this story and I just finished. It was awesome! I really like how you write!

Wow, great story, i really enjoyed it and the ending was great. i can't wait to here what happenes next. Hehe... My user account name is the same as your story.

Oh I like the ending!

lunar eclipses are awesome! hehehe

haha i have a wanted poster in my room!! - just a random comment...

*smiles wickedly with Alena*

awesome. it deserves a smirk and applause.

Hey good chapter! Alena's back story was very sad. D: I feel bad for her.

I'm not sure I like how many flashbacks there are. I feel like we've lost sight of the initial confrontation--between Drew and Alena.

:O Very impressive. Although putting the A\N in the middle of the story interrupted the flow...hint hint...;) Really good!

Wow. Much, much better! Way to go. This is a really cool story. Kinda creepy, though...(huggles poor Alena) Poor kid.

Wow, Alena hasn't had a very nice childhood. D: Makes sense for her to be so twisted!

Effective use of flashback! I liked the sensory details. I wonder what else Alena can do...

Great job! Looking forward to the next installment. :D

Uh oh. I bet he's in for a really intense story time!

This is very well written. I really got the sense that Alena is a little...well, a little 'off'. I'm curious as to what she did, and why Drew's brother would hang up a wanted poster in his room. *raises eyebrow* Hm.

My only complaint is that I didn't get a good feel for Drew's character at all. You focused entirely on Alena, which gave me a great image of her, but not of him. I don't know what he was feeling at all; I'd be pretty freaked out.

Overall I think you did a great job. Update soon!