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| Twin Eclipse 2008-11-29 ch 1,   | haha i love this, hehee, is there a sequal, or like, something? if there isn't, you should totally turn this into a story, it's really good heeheheh |
| BrdomIsTheDvl 2008-11-17 ch 1, | OH NOES. What happened to Lance?!?!!??! I actually LIKED him! XDD OH YES. PEDOPHILIA! :D XDD |
| Shampain86 2008-10-16 ch 1, | LOVE IT. AS usual, your writing is amazing. I heart you, sweets. And I thought the ending was. . . nice. |
| Benjamin Nowhere 2008-10-15 ch 1, | This was pretty dang good kid ^_^ This and other things, parts, sections (lol...) made me laugh, "he settles down in the heat left on the sheets. This isn't cool." I read it that he moved to the warm part and muttered, "This isn't cool." MY BAD. |
| CaFFy 2008-09-16 ch 1, | That was amusing in a weird way lol. "I'll save that for letter." Fail. I started eating chips as soon as Trevor started uking in the beginning xD |
| JLRivera 2008-09-13 ch 1, | I adore that Trevor was such a douchebag. It makes the story so much more believable... Funny story: I actually know someone this douchebaggy. Anyway, I kind of would have liked to see more of Lance, but I still really like this story. Definitely going to check out some of your other stories. Oh BTW, I have this page where I link to some of my favorite original slash. I haven't been asking but I figure it's a good idea to start. Would it be okay if I link to this? It's fine if it isn't, I just would like people to read some awesome slash. |
| RACHEYHSFHFDGDF 2008-09-13 ch 1, | I LOVE THIS STORY. SO MUCH. IT WOULD BE COOL IF IT WAS LONGER. |
| magalina 2008-09-13 ch 1, | Aw, I loved it :):) Though I kinda feel sorry for Lance...but not really :p "Or not quite, because I've never wanted to throw a puppy down and fuck it till it screamed. Thank God." LOL XD Thanks! I really really loved it, Charlie was really cute and Trevor was such an asshole~ :DD |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2008-09-13 ch 1, | hahaha. wow. |
| cookie 2008-09-12 ch 1, | unrealistic and weak no way ..it was just right great job. |
| Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-09-12 ch 1, | Aw I love it! So cute!! |
| Pundit 2008-09-12 ch 1, | It's cute! I like it at least. I feel bad for Lance though, since Trevor is such a douche. |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-09-12 ch 1, | That was cute XD And hilarious. I was giggling a lot. Charlie was so cute! And Trevor was just such a bastard XD |