Great chapter! i loved every bit of it. i cant wait for the next chapter!

ohemjay!
this sounds so gooderz!!
i cant wait for the second chapter!!
its wonderful Ashley!

Loved it and thanks for putting this link on our youtube i never knew this excisted im gonna start using it so now i have youtube fancic nd fanpress lol alotta work :D

Ashley, I love how you are writing for your own topic! Loved it!-Mia

Awsome !! I've always read you're fanfic's and now im reading this !xD
You are actually the reason i've made this account xD

awesome :D
I LOVE all of your stories :D

that was great. i love it. i read your stories on fanfiction but have a different username: xLivexItxupx, but whats the difference between this and fanfiction?

Amazing start! :)
I cannot wait to read more, sounds like it's going to get interesting real quick :)
-Gracefulxillusions; Chloe.

colness story! xD cant wait for the next chappy, and i think this will be an interesting story :P but wait, her name is october? or lillian, im lost xD but anyways, cool story :D

Hey, great so far... Update Soon!
I found this from you're fanfic account... those stories are great too! =D
Anyway Update Soon!

That was an extremely good start!
I'm totally dieing to know what happens next!
James... ::giggles::.
Update soon.