|Reviews for Tragedy Is My Saving Grace|
| deefective 10/18/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, you rhymed with this one. I think that was the way to go because it flowed very nicely with this piece. Rolled off the tongue and all that. The only thing is that one line:
"Life's just someone's flipped coin"
I don't know exactly why it doesn't work but it seems a bit off. I think it's the two contractions in the sentence. Too much abbreviation. Other than that, wonderful job.
-Dee, from the Review Marathon.
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| Chidaruma Kamisori 10/13/08 . chapter 1
| vitriolicvermilion 9/17/08 . chapter 1
I love this SO much.
I like the idea behind the poem quite a lot.
| dragonflydreamer 9/14/08 . chapter 1
I like this poem a lot because the flow and the rhyme were wonderfully done.
I didn't like when lines ended with "and," because I found the word rather useless.
Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
| Kirrithian 9/13/08 . chapter 1
I like this piece: it gets you thinking. 'time's a vicious circle and life's just someone's flipped coin' especially as i can relate to it. I also like the imagery of the race. One point that bugs me is the last line. Due to the length of the poem it feels like it should be the start or part of another staza, where you could round things off(maybe relate to the race theme again.). At the moment it just seems to cut off the poem, which is a bit of a dissapointment to the reader.