Two things: I didn't like the whole married thing because it seems unrealistic that someone would wear an engagement ring on a chain. Also, how did she know you weren't going to your math class?

That said I really like the premise of the piece. It's sweet and true about people how one simple thing makes such a difference.

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This made me smile at the end.

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I liked this. It seemed so simple, and yet that's what made it so beautiful.

"going out separate ways" = should be "our," I think