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Reviews For: Lover I Don't Have to Love

Bi-curious George
2008-10-02
ch 1,
Writing style was excellent, as was the use of setting, description and dialogue. Very well written. The only few problems I have are:

Your characters are over-romanticised and too flawless. A character with flaws (physical) is more relateable to.

Actually, that was the only problem I had. Otherwise it was stunningly written. Nice work ^^.
Vampire Butter Beans
2008-09-22
ch 1,
Nice
Sit In Solemn Silence
2008-09-20
ch 1,
aw, I wish it was longer. I finished the story before I finished the song(yes I was listening to Lover I Don't Have To Love) So I read it again, just because I'm weird like that. But it was still really good, despite the length. One night stands can be really hot.
Jade Ellizabeth
2008-09-15
ch 1,
I really liked this.
I happen to adore the song that inspired you and I really think the story suits the song and vice versa.
Your abstract descriptions and lyrical wording were lovely to read.
excellent job :]
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