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| Bi-curious George 2008-10-02 ch 1, | Writing style was excellent, as was the use of setting, description and dialogue. Very well written. The only few problems I have are: Your characters are over-romanticised and too flawless. A character with flaws (physical) is more relateable to. Actually, that was the only problem I had. Otherwise it was stunningly written. Nice work ^^. |
| Vampire Butter Beans 2008-09-22 ch 1, | Nice |
| Sit In Solemn Silence 2008-09-20 ch 1, | aw, I wish it was longer. I finished the story before I finished the song(yes I was listening to Lover I Don't Have To Love) So I read it again, just because I'm weird like that. But it was still really good, despite the length. One night stands can be really hot. |
| Jade Ellizabeth 2008-09-15 ch 1, | I really liked this. I happen to adore the song that inspired you and I really think the story suits the song and vice versa. Your abstract descriptions and lyrical wording were lovely to read. excellent job :] |