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Little blue tree 2008-11-28 . chapter 1
Interesting little short story. I like the theme, it seems that we all stick to our little rituals rather than do new things or the things we love. I liked Andi, it was strange when you added at the end that Andi wasn't a set gender because I just painted a character out of, I shall call Andi her because that's who she became. Alas, the "I don't know what a coma is," group is such a troubling one.
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