Stix,

That's universal in 7 little lines! So brutally honest and concise-why can't everyone communicate like that?

McKinley

Awwe.

I know how you feel.

Lovely write.

-C.K.

if hes willing to make it the last,

he's not worth making a first.

you're better than this stix, you deserve better.

it seemed to me like he'd stay forever. hope you're okay, and great job.

you know that feeling when your heart is being tugged on... i got that when i read this... its very simple and yet very powerful.

one of my favorite things you have writen

love ya stix

-the fishy

Honey, from what I've heard about him, he's going to stay forever.

great job.

cool

ahh, I hope things are ok :( the 'one last' has me worried

I like this, just because it's so simple, yet says a lot. Good work :)

Faith