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| TesubCalle 2008-11-09 ch 1,   | I think this was a really good effort! Hold onto this one. You have the bones of a great story if you ever want to revisit these conflicts and flesh them out someday down the road. Best of luck on all your future writing endeavours. |
| Ai.Wun 2008-09-19 ch 1, | =( that makes me sad .. but it was pretty good. ^^b |
| Electric Rose. 2008-09-18 ch 1, | oh. oh... i liked it. i liked the style, and the mystery, and the characters. it all just went really well together. awesome job ^_^ |