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W. Griffin 2008-10-19 . chapter 1
The last line seems a little awkward to me.
But maybe I'm just weird that way.

But I do like the poem, it's very simple and to the point. Good job!

- W Griffin
dragonflydreamer 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
I like the last line because although it's simple, it carries a lot of meaning.

I don't like the first/second lines; I think the first line repeated. It's particularly an eyesore in a poem as short as this, so I suggest fixing it.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
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