I love reading each one of your series that revolve around the Damarkin family.

You're a great writer and I'm so glad you brought your work to fictionpress.

Why don't you publish, seriously? This is good stuff (in my opinion).

I love the plot and the sheer randomness that ties in...

I hope to find out what happens to Lyskander :3

Thanks again!

Wow. I'm really surprised at how much I liked this, but I really, really did!

I'd wondered...but for some reason I'd thought the heroine wouldn't be described as a mouse, looking like a horse, with big ears.
I definitely like her though!

Arg! I'm really going back and forth on whether Anna Belle is really Emmi. Although I'm gonna go with no; it wouldn't be the first time I thought the love interest was someone it wasn't. You're very good at that, by the way.

Oh! What a Male Chauvenist Bastard! I think it's going to take a lot to make me like Regan.

Oh! Poor Em!!
Even if we don't get Emmy's POV till much later, I really hope it doesn't take TOO long for them to meet. And you do very well at varying your characters; you're one of the few authors who doesn't have a type cast for characters.

Wow, I LOVE your kids' names! and yes, at some point they'll probably hate you for it, but at some point they'll love you for it too. I've already decided to give my kids multiple middle names so when they decide they don't like it, they can use a different one.

It was good, but I don't think it's my favourite.
It felt a bit rushed near the end basically when you started making Mouse and Emry interact more (well conspire together) it all happened in about a chapter and made it very clear she was Emmi.
Although I can't decide if that was a bad thing or not. There was a definite build to the climax then a tying up of loose ends, more so than in the other stories in the series I think, or maybe I just have this impression since it comes after Shaun's which is rather action and drama packed.
As I was saying, I can't decide whether the rushed feeling was good or not, I would prefer that it didn't exist obviously, but I do really like the fact that Mouse and Emry had little to no interaction beforehand; it protects Emmi's identity and is a bit atypical which I like.

yay!
you do kinda have a thing about virgins, any particular reason?

oh I'm so glad it's not her! I always thought it was Mouse since she was close enough to know all the family dynamics and I was a bit annoyed that I'd apparently guessed incorrectly. Plus I think it's not like Emmy to be so brow-beaten, and she seemed more intelligent than Vis Montess.#
yay! we shall see . . .

Loved it! I like Emmi because he reminds me of myself. Also, i loved Jumyria, even though its an absolutely horrible place to me because of all to rules and formal relationships, because it was such an interesting idea, im always in love with the settings in your stories because each culture always has really different, and you come up with some very creative concepts and i love how the people from each place are so different...even though this is like normal life lol..:D

Okay so definately not Anna Bele and i still have hard time believing its that woman he thinks it is (so sorry but the long titles confuse me), i thought mabye she was the servant that looked like a horse but i think emmi was the one who told him she looked like a horse, so that wouldn't work. And because of all the information abotu unicorns and the fact that Emmi keeps on saying we, makes me think that shes a unicorn or its 'parter', but knowing me thast completely wrong :D I love Emmis and Emrys relationship, that kind of closeness and bond would be amazing!

Ah, this is so frustrating! I've been almost certain that Emmi is Anna Belle, but i just cannot place the voice of Emmi to anna belles face and actions. She is one of the only people who would know such things about everyone there, and im finding it a bit weird that Emry hasnt even considered it, seeing as hes intelligent and shes the most obvious person.

That was sweet :) and different first thoughts are that the girl is from xesos, but im pretty clueless

man i love it... mind you i love most ur stories